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Drew
Orange Belt
Joined: 28 Sep 2011
Posts: 188
Location: My other body
Styles: Boxing, Muay Thai, Sub Wrestling, Tai Chi, MMA, Medieval, Extreme Reaction Combat Scenarios (This is not a drill) Judo, formerly Mishima Style Karate
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2015 10:00 pm Post subject: Analysis Video |
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Thought I'd try my hand at an analysis video in the same vein as Lawrence Kenshin or BJJ Scout's stuff. I dug around on my hard drive to find any footage that might share a theme so I could learn the video editing software I have, this is what I came up with:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FqfKnFuMfBA
Let me know what you think. |
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Wado Heretic
Green Belt
Joined: 23 May 2014
Posts: 497
Location: United Kingdom, England, Shropshire
Styles: Wado-Ryu , Kobayashi Shorin-Ryu (Kodokan), RyuKyu Kobojutsu
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2015 8:16 am Post subject: |
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Rule 1: Never use colloquialisms.
Main complaint: The music. The electronic detracts some what from the experience of watching the video. Electronic music could work, just someting more energetic and less up beat perhaps.
Needs consistency on how you present your commentary; either always place it in a box, or leave it imposed against the video.
Let the footage play longer to better demonstrate what you are discussing. However, the analysis is sound, and over all the illustration of points and the devices used to help facilitate the explanations are good. _________________ R. Keith Williams
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Montana
Pre-Black Belt
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Posts: 878
Location: Formerly Kalispell, Montana, now Spokane, WA
Styles: Shorin Ryu Matsumura Kenpo & Kobudo
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2015 1:55 pm Post subject: |
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I'm certainly no expert at this (my youngest son is however and does TV shows for a living), but I had to keep hitting pause to allow me to read the script and then look at what it was referring to. Otherwise I'd never be able to keep up with it.
And the music...personally, it would have been better with no music, rather than THAT music. lol _________________ If you don't want to stand behind our troops, please..feel free to stand in front of them.
Student since January 1975---4th Dan, retired due to non-martial arts related injuries. |
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Drew
Orange Belt
Joined: 28 Sep 2011
Posts: 188
Location: My other body
Styles: Boxing, Muay Thai, Sub Wrestling, Tai Chi, MMA, Medieval, Extreme Reaction Combat Scenarios (This is not a drill) Judo, formerly Mishima Style Karate
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2015 4:50 pm Post subject: |
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Montana wrote: |
...I had to keep hitting pause to allow me to read the script and then look at what it was referring to. Otherwise I'd never be able to keep up with it.
And the music...personally, it would have been better with no music, rather than THAT music. lol |
It occurred to me during editing that I don't really know how fast people read. I tried to err on the long side but still didn't get it apparently. The plan for future ones is to narrate them, we'll see how that works out.
As for the music, didn't know people hated 8 bit stuff that much. Royalty free and all that. I felt like having music made the cuts seem less abrupt, and something was better than nothing.
Thanks for the input. |
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Patrick
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Joined: 01 May 2001
Posts: 28739
Location: Los Angeles, California
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abulbashar
White Belt
Joined: 10 Aug 2015
Posts: 1
Location: Bangladesh
Styles: Smartness
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2015 8:17 pm Post subject: Your video is not working |
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This video contains content from UFC, who has blocked it on copyright grounds. |
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