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mastertae
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The Pain Within My Heart
The Pain Within My Heart Is All I Have Left
of Thee...As Mine Eyes Were Forced To Gaze
Upon The Lifeless Corpse of Thee...As They
Slowly Lifted Thee InTo The Wretched
Ground...I Had To Cry For Thee...I Was Force
OnTo The Ground...I Had To Mourn For
Thee...My Heart Grows Heavy Still...
It Burst For Thee...So All I Could Do Was
Lie Upon The Ground...And Die For Thee
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mastertae
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I don't mind that a person give her or his opinion...if every one were to like what I write life would be pretty boring...  |
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SaiFightsMS
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Joined: 28 Oct 2001
Posts: 6397
Location: Ohio
Styles: Shotokan, Shorin Ryu, Shi-to Ryu
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In the summer when I work out at my local Y in the early morning as I come home it is just often getting daylight. As I cross the bridge it is a place where it is common to see a great blue heron from.
One day as I stopped to watch the heron it took off in flight. It flew right under the bridge where I was. Such a wingspan. It was absolutely spectacular.
That to me was poetry.
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mastertae
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| I believe any thing can be poetry...well said saifightsms |
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Prodigy-Child
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Joined: 02 Jul 2001
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| very nice! makes alot of sense too! |
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mastertae
Orange Belt
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Do You Truly Know?
Do you truly know a friend by their name?
And what happens on every given day?
Have you ever wondered if a friend is truly happy?
Or just maybe. . .life is just too long to live another day.
Do you truly know a friend by the expressions on their face?
Or could there be another ace up the sleeve?
Afraid within a day the friend decides to leave.
Do you truly know a friend within the midnight hour?
Could they be crying. . .praying. . .
So their soul may be devoured?
Do you know your friend?
Do you lend your hearts desire?
Do you know your friend?
Do you know their fire and the reason that it burns?
Or do you yearn to know more to give your life for them?
For you may never know the day or the hour when the essence
of their life comes to a final end.
Copyright ©2002 J.W. |
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AnonymousOne
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Joined: 27 Jan 2002
Posts: 812
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More faster grasshopper for the day may come
That the enemy will attack you using Wing Chun
Sharpen your sword kick and harden your gut
If you dont, he may kick your butt
Block to the left, block to the right
Forget the girls, you are training tonight
Pain and sweat will be your best friend
You must move faster even till the end
Grasshopper, Grasshopper life is not easy
Its not your fault you are ugly and your hairy is greasy
Its better to stay and train all day
You dont need a woman what can I say
Practise the monkey and tiger form
When you are finished mow my front lawn
Wax on, wax off and do it again
My car needs cleaning I am not insane
The time will come when the enemy will arrive
And all this cleaning will make your survive
Grasshopper cant you understand you are not getting paid
And God knows you are too ugly to get laid
So you my as well train and do my chore
If you dont you lil ******* I will show you my door
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mastertae
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i think this is a good thread...for people to relax and share their thought on writing...
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Patrick
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Joined: 01 May 2001
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Location: Los Angeles, California
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kicker
Black Belt
Joined: 17 Sep 2001
Posts: 3649
Location: Canada!!!! (The 5th biggest City)
Styles: kickboxing, muay thai, tennis, lots more.
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very good mastertae 
All of these poems are good 
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